Once upon a time there's a magic dragon named Puff. Puff the magic dragon on lived from sea. It frolicked in the Honah Lee. This island was weather autumn and very beautiful island. Puff has a friend named Little Jackie. They always together.
One day Jackie have a fear problem. He is always sad. Puff tried to comfort him with use her magic. Than Puff, Jackie drawing on paper and cut it out with her magic and change the picture was jackie so called Little Jackie Paper.Puff and Jackie paper had the idea to make a trip to the sea. Jackie was frightened in case of large waves in the sea and evil pirate king. Together they would travel on a boat with billowed sail. They very happy. Jackie was sitting on the tail of srong. Noble kings and princes would bow whenever they came. Jackie fantasy realized the waves and the evil pirate king, but puff always advise that jackie is always bold. Than Jackie be bold. When arriving on an island with a gray night. They stop running. And then the sound of thunder. That not to scare Jackie.
Puff lives forever because he has magic power but not for Jackie. When Jackie had to retrun home. Puff feel sad because not friend of adventure. Then Puff insert himself into the cave. And now Jackie being bold and not timid child.....
Great job, Ulya! Who is your partner? You didn't write it in your post..
BalasHapusIt's already good, but still need some grammatical corrections :)
Extra point for you (and maybe your partner)for the early posting :)
Miss Wahyu